User:Ryanzisk26/São Tomé ibis/Rgodek518 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

username: Ryanzisk26/São Tomé ibis


 * Link to draft you're reviewinghttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ryanzisk26/São_Tomé_ibisveaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * São Tomé ibis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

- There is not yet any lead for this article, but because it is so early in the editing process, this is to be expected.

Content:

- The main point of content discusses the population and its threats. This section was informative, and a great start to the article as a whole.

Tone & Balance:

- Although brief, the article does a good job of staying neutral and unbiased throughout.

Sources & References:

- There is only one source, which is doesn't look like it comes from a scientific journal. My best advice would be to try to find where the article finds its sources, and then to see if any of those are primary sources. It can be very difficult to find adequate information on niche species, so I understand how hard it can be to track down scientific journals.

Organization:

- The article has headers labeling what each section will discuss, which makes it easy to find whatever information the reader is looking for.

Images & Media:

- The page does not yet have any images, but with time images and other graphics can be added.

Overall Impressions:

- I think that the article, although brief, is off to a good start.