User:Ryanzisk26/São Tomé ibis/Seheistand Peer Review

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Ryanzisk26


 * User:Ryanzisk26/São Tomé ibis

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Ryanzisk26 added the number of ibises remaining and its status as endangered, which is a useful contribution. They also mentioned a nickname for the species.

Under Threats, the user explained the threats that the species face, especially overhunting, habitat loss, and human intervention. However, they mention how invasive species are a threat to the ibises, but I think they could expand on that and include more information about it. They also include the precise location to which the ibises are native, which is an exemplary contribution.

The reference appears to be legitimate.

Everything looks great, except there is a conventional error: "aside from these" should be "Aside from this."