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Alright here is my paragraph explaining the history of the Bread and Honey festival

Since 1973, in an effort to retain a separate identity from the larger city of Mississauga, The Promotion Committee of the town of Streetsville held the first Bread and Honey Festival. This was an acknowledgement to the town’s history and its involvement with milling as Kraft Canada and ADM Milling Ltd had well-established flourmills in the area. The festival was an astounding success, which led to the Bread and Honey festival becoming an annual event being held on the first weekend of June. In 1974, it was incorporated, with Sam McCallion as Charter President.

Let me know what or if any changes should be made Kozzy39 (talk) 02:44, 27 March 2012 (UTC) Kozzy39

By the way, i know everyone knows, and our group is called streetsville.. but our topic is streetsville and the band was a no go. RyderPatrick (talk) 02:48, 27 March 2012 (UTC)RyderPatrick

Someone should add some extra information on the economy of Streetsville, there is one short sentence there I am sure we can add more. I'm going to add some more info about the Bread and Honey festival and the Santa Clause parade. Kozzy39 (talk) 04:23, 27 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

Geoff that sounds good ! And I'm going to add a section about the streetsville tigers as you guys know! And I'm gonna research some more for things to talk about! Going good so far guys! RyderPatrick (talk) 00:00, 28 March 2012 (UTC)RyderPatrick

HEY GUYS What do you think about adding this section to the page? and do you think the Citation is okay?

The Streetsville Tigers have been around since 1946. Streetsville along with seven other communities in the Toronto Township formed the T.T.H.L. In 1962 the Streetsville and District Minor Hockey Association began to play in their new rink, Vic Johnston Community Centre. During the early years the Streetsville’s Hockey team played under many names including, the Thunderbirds, Hounds, Tigers, Kings, and Panthers. In the 1967-68 season they left the T.T.H.L. Streetsville iced five teams to played in the Tri-County A league of the Ontario Minor Hockey Association at the start of the 1968-69 season. That first season included, The novice Thunderbirds, The IGA Pee Wees', The Hutt Fence Bantams, The Maple Lodge Midgets and the Juvenile Derbies. Streetsville won two championships that year.

In the late eighties then President, the late Bill Mann and the hockey executive embarked on a name search for the Streetsville Rep teams. The winning name chosen was Tigers, from that date on the name and team colours were adopted into the Rules and Regulations. The next step was to find a logo and that occurred the following season. The Tiger logo was designed and adopted in 1990 and has been incorporated into all tiger equipment, sweaters, pants, equipment bags, hats and jackets.

The Tigers moved to the O.M.H.A. Central AAA league in 1991-1992 where they competed for four years. Since joining the G.T.H.L. the Tiger teams have been very competitive winning two Divisional Champions, one Carnation Cup and one City Championship. 2006 the Streetsville Tigers Celebrated 60 years of hockey in Streetsville.

hey guys so i posted this above section^^ to the streetsville page should i add some more stuff to the streetsville page, or do you think each of us should add just one thing to the page and that would be 4 edits? RyderPatrick (talk)RyderPatrick

Hey Pat, you should add a little bit about the whole renovation on Vic Johnson arena, also you can include a little information about the Streetsville Derbys the jr. A team that used to play there. Kozzy39 (talk) 03:44, 28 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

This is my recommendation for the first sentence - The Streetsville Tigers Minor Hockey Association was established in the year 1946. All the information looks good and the reference is good as well. I would add what day you referenced the website on the reference list Kozzy39 (talk) 03:44, 28 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

Here is some more information that I added about the Bread and Honey festival. Let me know if there is any changes that you see that should be made.

In 1984, the Bread and Honey festival merged together with the Kinsmen Club, Lions Club, and Rotary Club as a cooperative community project. Many volunteers are needed for the organization and operation of the festival as in 1990 the festival moved from being a one-day event, to becoming a weekend festival.

Currently the Bread and Honey festival is held at Streetsville Memorial Park, which is a natural amphitheater that contains 30 acres of land on the pristine Credit River. New for 2012 the Mississauga Transit (MiWay) is running free shuttle service for residents at select points. Kozzy39 (talk) 16:34, 28 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

I was working on my part of the project, and noticed that your changes have already been applied. Did anyone manage to take screenshots before creating changes ? S.ahmed7(talk)

I've decided to add a "Community Node" section and I've got some pictures. Are we allowed to add pictures? If so, any clues on how to add a picture? S.ahmed7(talk) Yeah Geoff Took them before, and there is a tutorial somewhere if you go to help on the side RyderPatrick (talk) 00:34, 29 March 2012 (UTC)RyderPatrick

Okay so here is my part that i edited S.ahmed7(talk)

Streetsville as a Community Node
Streetsville is a tight community and has its place in history with its closely connected village-type node. It is home to many historical buildings due to its 19th century atmosphere. Streetsville is known as a Community Node, and therefore provides various resources applicable to a Community Node. The city of Mississauga focuses on Streetsville’s urban structure to grow in existing and proposed services and the community infrastructure. As a community node, there are many things in Streetsville that are used on a day-to-day basis. This includes: local shops, restaurants, community facilities, entertainment, schools, parks, and an impressive housing stock that meets the requirements of new residents.

Also, I added a picture to the Demographics section. It explains where the people of streetsville are employed. The percentage data is quite recent and provides a good insight on the types of jobs available and how the employees are distributed. S.ahmed7 (talk)

Sweet stuff just send me your screen shots RyderPatrick (talk) 03:10, 29 March 2012 (UTC)RyderPatrick patrick_ryder_@hotmail.com

If there are any grammatical errors in my work, I'd love to have it edited. By the way, I updated the population because the previous number was from 2001. Here's a shot of what it looked like before I changed it. S.ahmed7(talk)

Hey Pat, I changed up your information about the Derby's by just adding a little bit of information about it. Let me know what you think? (Original) - Streetsville Hockey doesn't stop there they also have very successful Junior A team, the Streetsville Derbys. (New) - Streetsville had a successful Junior A hockey club the Streetsville Derbys which played out of Vic Johnson Arena. At the conclusion of the 2007 season, the Derbys moved to a new location, Westwood Arena in Rexdale, Ontario. In 2011 with the Ontario Junior Hockey League's goal of contraction, the Derby's merged with the Cobourg Cougars. Kozzy39 (talk) 04:18, 29 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

Hey Syed, I edited your piece and made a few small tweaks

Streetsville is a tight-knit community that has its place in history with its closely connected village-type node. It is home to many historical buildings due to its 19th century atmosphere. Streetsville is known as a Community Node, and therefore provides various resources applicable to a Community Node. The city of Mississauga focuses on Streetsville’s urban structure to grow in existing and proposed services and the community infrastructure. As a Community Node, there are many things in Streetsville that are used on a day-to-day basis. This includes: local shops, restaurants, community facilities, entertainment, schools, parks, and an impressive housing stock that meets the requirements of new residents. Kozzy39 (talk) 04:31, 29 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

Sounds a lot better, Thanks! S.ahmed7(talk)

Hey guys I added a new point in the Community section let me know what you think and if there are any revisions that should be made.

Canada Day
Every July 1st at Memorial Park, the Village of Streetsville puts on a Canada day celebration. There are various activities occurring throughout the afternoon, ranging from face-painting to dance performances. Local businesses sponsor and execute various performances throughout the evening and is then finished off with a firework display occurring around 10pm. Kozzy39 (talk) 05:09, 29 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

i like what you added Geoff it sounds pretty good ! i'll be sure to add it! and it looks like chris added his section too! Is everyone okay for me to copy paste and send this in?RyderPatrick (talk) 05:43, 29 March 2012 (UTC)RyderPatrick
 * Hey guys, so this page is looking pretty good!

Just added this last piece of extra information for the Bread and Honey festival

Some of the events that take place over the course of the weekend include live musical performances, a carnival run by the Lions club, and a consumers market with over 100 vendors. The main attraction over the weekend would be the parade that proceeds south on Queen Street to Old Station Road. Kozzy39 (talk) 06:11, 29 March 2012 (UTC)Kozzy39

= Christopher's Edits =

Municipal
Streetsview is a member of the eleventh ward within the city of Mississauga. Representing the ward is Councillor George Carlson. George was first elected Councillor of the eleventh ward in 2000 and was re-elected in 2003, 2006, and 2010. Carlson is a direct descendant of one of Streetsville’s founders, Henry Rutledge (1797 – 1875) who also served as a local Councillor. Prior to the annexing of Mississauga, Hazel McCallion was the mayor of Streetsville (1970–1973). She is now the third mayor of Mississauga and still resides in Streetsville.

Provincial
Streetsville resides in the Provincial riding of Mississauga-Streetsville. The riding was created in 2003 after both Mississauga—Erindale and Mississauga South were divided up. The riding is continued to be represented by Provincial Liberal Legislative Member Bob Delaney. Delaney was elected in the provincial election of 2003, by defeating Progressive Conservative Nina Tangri by over 7,000 votes. In 2006, Delaney was appointed the Parliamentary Assistant to Minister Responsible for Seniors. He was re-elected in the provincial election of 2007 again, defeating Tangri by 11,155 votes. On January 25, 2010, Delaney was named Parliamentary Assistant to the Minister of Revenue.

Federal
Prior to 1993, Streetsville favoured the Conservative party with Progressive Conservative Bob Horner being elected as an MP in the 1984 and 1988 federal elections. Since then Streetsville voters swayed towards the Liberals with the party winning the riding consecutively to this date. In 2000, Liberal MP Steve Mahoney defeated Alliance candidate Philip Leong in the Federal Mississauga-Streetsville riding and remained in office until 2003. Wajid Khan then took the riding in 2004 by beating Conservative Nina Tangri by 8,481 votes and continued onto a second term after defeating Conservative challenger Raminder Gill by 5,792 votes in 2006. During his seconder term, Khan served as a consultant to Steven Harper and the Conservative party on issues concerning the Middle East. Based on an ultimatum established by the Conservatives, Khan switched parties in 2007 and posed as a Conservative candidate in the 2008 elections. Liberal, Bonnie Crombie, went on to defeat Khan in the elections by 5,000 votes.

Demographics
As of 2009, Streetsville’s population stood at 47,327 with a 9.9% population increase between 2001 and 2006 and a subsequent 20% increase from 2006 to 2009. From 2006 to 2009, households also increased in number from 12,178 to 13,722. The majority of Streetsville residences own their own homes (85%) with more then 51,000 residents holding a university or college degree. Also the majority of residences work within grey or white collar jobs versus only 27% of the population consisting of labour workers. Furthermore, the average household income of Streetsville residents amounts to $124,255 with only a 5.6% unemployment rate. In relation to religion, 41.4% of residents are Roman Catholics while religious populations such as Muslims (6.9%) and Anglicans (6.3%) are continuing to grow. Also nearly 48% of Streetsville residents are identified as visible minorities including predominantly East Indians, South Asians and Chinese. Subsequently, 53% of the population's main language is English while the region boasts many non-official languages such as Chinese, Arabic, and Punjabi. With homes averaging around 3.4 bedrooms, the average family consists of three people per home and has around 1.4 children. Streetsville's population has an average age of 38 with 33% of the population being between ages 25-44, 23.1% of the population are between the ages 45- 64 and 14.5% of the population being between the ages of 15- 24. Also among the population, 61.4% of residents are married while 29.1% are single and 9.5% are widowed or divorced.

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Alright, great stuff guys, have a good summer and best of luck on exams.