User:RyeNicole/Ekoi people/Vrede1mp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RyeNicole


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RyeNicole/Ekoi_people?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ekoi people

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like there was no information added to the lead section. It already included information on the Ekoi peoples' location, language, and related groups. It already references the Ekoi's headdresses and text which does make an appearance later in the page in more detail. There is also a section expanding on the geographical location of the tribe. The lead is lacking other references to other information written in the article. Such as their history, societal order, and culture like art.

The content added does seem relevant to the topic. The information added was mainly in sections like History, Colonialism, Ekoi Society, and Cannibalism. With how little was written about Cannibalism, it can be confusing if this will help the article, but if more is added to it and shows how it was important to their culture, it could work.

The content added was balanced and neutral. There were no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position. Nor does the information added seem to attempt to persuade the reader in favor of anything.

The information added was backed by two sources that seem reliable. The information is written in each section, and the sources reflect what was already written. The sources may not be up to date as they were written in 1984 and 1996. However, the information added does seem to connect well and add to what was already there.

When it comes to the organization of the article, it may be best to rearrange some of the sections. After the lead section, continue with the geography. It further explains where they are located and their language. Next, Language since they correlate with one another. After Language. It is maybe good to move History next with Colonialism following. After that Culture, Ekoi Society, Ngba and Nnimm, Canabalism. Art, Mythology, and Leopard last. The ones that follow Culture al seem to be subcategories of Culture so the culture section can be a small introduction to each one possibly. Having this reorder, will help the page be easier to read as topics similar to one another will be next to one another.