User:Ryleeproudfit/Bustle/A1imack Peer Review

General info
Ryleeproudfit
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://w.wiki/9YCF :https://w.wiki/9YCK

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * New and current content and examples, reflected from what we've learned and worked with in class.
 * Clearly states the topic and direction of the article.
 * The added Origin and 1800-1900's sections are relevant.
 * Adds to the overall tone.
 * The sources are thorough, just need to be updated with missing information.
 * Sources are current and from multiple locations