User:Ryleyhorner/Disability in children's literature/Kcj475 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ryleyhorner)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No draft as it is already published.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Disability in children's literature

Evaluate the drafted changes
Ryleyhorner contributes some casual editing to the Disability in children's literature wikipage. The original lead section is adequate as it leads into the subject while establishing a neutral tone. The structure is well maintained as it goes from historical to positive and negative sections, however the "features of harmful disability representation" is incredibly short and does not seem to align with what I am sure is an expansive topic on how disability is used poorly in literature and what this can do to the audience and society. Ryleyhorner's contribution on line 16 does seem to meet this imbalance as it provides a credited examples of how the portrayal of disabled readers in the eyes of non-disabled readers. Overall, there are some good contributions to this article, however I think that the section mentioned above could use more attention.