User:Ryskimustard12/Salvage anthropology/Mackenzie0203stewart Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this article is Super well written you've added so much detail! and have a really well researched portion. You've maintained a neutral tone throughout the entire article and your additions make sense to the original article! My only critique would be to edit the bibliography and put it into the bibliography sandbox incase that part is for marks! Thats it though Great work!!