User:Ryskimustard12/Salvage ethnography/Mackenzie0203stewart Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this is a really well written piece for what you've added or made from scratch! My constructive criticisms are as follows:


 * 1) The link between Missionaries and anthropologists, maybe it should have some more detail than just one sentence?
 * 2) The collection methods of salvage ethnography section is one sentence as well and seems to end abruptly so maybe adding more to wrap it together more
 * 3) Over all this is all of the corrections I have since I think this article is pretty good minus the few suggestions I've made