User:Rz2345/Slanted screen/Afiaetonam Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rz2345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rz2345/Slanted screen


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Slanted Screen

Evaluate the drafted changes
There isn't a lead.

I think in terms of content, the article is pretty thorough. I would have like to see more of the conclusions drawn in the film however. The authors did a good job of maintaining a neutral tone throughout. While all of the sources weren't necessarily academic/scholarly, I imagine it would be hard to find that kind of souce for this topic in particular so given the available resources, think the sources were good. One of the links led to an unavailable page though so check up on that.

I think adding some images either from the film itself or some of the films/actors mentioned would be nice.