User:Rzheng37/Social media marketing/Keithsea Peer Review

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Rzheng37
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Social media marketing Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social media marketing article

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like what you have written. It clearly comes from a place of experience and understanding of the app, it is also interesting to read as from someone who has little experience with this app. I think though that it could use a source for more of the general information. Also for citing it should go at the end of the sentence. The last thing is that the second paragraph is a bit too argumentative, I think if you could reword it to be more neutral it would work.