User:S.steinfeld10/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Yeshiva University

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose Yeshiva University, because it has recently been given a lot of media attention. The institution is the most prominent Jewish university in the US, and so it sets a precedent for other religious academies in the nation. My preliminary impression is that the article is well organized, concise, and contains the most important topics.

Evaluate the article
My initial problem is that the history section isn't cohesive. It skips from 1897 to 2012. Even if nothing occurred during those years (which I doubt), the lack of progress should be given a sentence. Moreover, I understand that LGBTQ+ Club Controversy is a hot topic right now, but I don't think it belongs in the and should take up most of the history section. "Controversies" should be given it's own section.

Additionally, I believe the list of presidents is lacking. If the institution was established in 1886, then the first president couldn't have started in 1917. I do appreciate how they link to all the president's wiki articles though.

Thirdly, if you made a main campus section, "campuses" as a subsection shouldn't be under student life. Campuses should have is own section, with main campus as a subsection. Similarly, athletics shouldn't have its own section, but should be included as a subsection of student life.