User:S1happy/Steelcase/FlyingLobster Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

S1happy, JovanaOlivas, SophiaGeyer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:S1happy/Steelcase


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Steelcase

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this is a really great start to your additions for this article. All of the information seems to be informative and unbiased. Likewise, your list of sources is impressive and they all seem to be from reliable outlets. The amount that are provided is especially beneficial in telling a whole story that is unbiased. It would be interesting if you could find more images that are related to any of the information; particularly in relation to covid. It would be cool to see images of the PPE and desk solutions they are manufacturing. Furthermore, the structure of your article draft is laid out very well. It's very organized and easy to understand, and the information itself is well-written.