User:S1happy/Steelcase/Jessicalidberg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

S1happy, JovanaOlivas, SophiaGeyer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:S1happy/Steelcase
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Steelcase

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall you did a very great job adding relevant information to the article. I really enjoyed the section on relating Steelcase to Covid-19 and how they have adapted since. I think it is written very professionally, unbiased, and concise. Very good job.

Also good job on including ample citations and links within the article itself, it makes the whole thing much more academic.

One suggestion would be to just go back and re-read all you contributions and make sure they sound grammatically correct and don't seem too wordy, it will help your contributions blend more seamlessly into the official article.

The sustainability section could be fleshed out a bit, but not necessary if that is all the information that was available.

Great work overall!