User:SCHILLGM9363/Symbolism in the French Revolution/Thonhn0943 Peer Review

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 * Reviewing SCHILLGM9363

Lead
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 * Not much of a lead, or doesn't show what was there before
 * but gives a general idea of what else they want to add

Content
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 * Content seems to be appropriate.
 * Unclear, however, if they are focusing on just physical symbolism in Society, or on more.
 * What about symbolism in music/ film/ literature

Tone and Balance
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 * Does not seem to hold any biases

Sources and References
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 * Links seem to work
 * Could use some more sources, however.
 * That should come with some more content

Images and Media
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 * I would suggest adding some pictures!

Overall impressions
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 * Overall, it just needs a bit more depth, and more sections.
 * Also, I would recommend going into more of the history behind some of this symbolism
 * Obviously, you wouldn't go into the entire French Revolution on this page, but i think you could tie more in.
 * Also, Why were these symbolic choices made????
 * Like, why an elephant??? What does that mean symbolically?