User:SDgreen568/Gay Men's Health Crisis/Omitt22 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Reviewing SDgreen568
 * User:SDgreen568/Gay Men's Health Crisis

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Content is relevant to the topic.
 * Content seems to be up-to-date.
 * It would be nice to see the final paragraph expanded on with more examples of the discrimination GMHC faced, if more examples are available.
 * It deals with a historically under-represented topic, HIV/AIDS.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Content is neutral.
 * No bias toward any particular side.
 * No under-represented or over-represented viewpoints.
 * Content does not attempt to persuade the viewer in one way or another.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * The content is backed up by reliable sources.
 * The sources seem to be thorough.
 * The sources seem to be diverse and representative where possible.
 * Links work fine.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Content is well-written, concise, and easy to understand.
 * The second paragraph could use some more proof-reading to check for fragments and awkward phrasing.
 * Content is well-organized.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * This content adds to the article and makes it seem more complete.
 * The content added provides thorough descriptions, despite the need for a couple of more examples in the final paragraph.
 * The third paragraph needs more examples of the ways GMHC was discriminated against by landlords, if more examples exist.