User:SJLupine/Water scarcity/Sandro1324 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SjLupine


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * SJLupine/Water scarcity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Water scarcity

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is not a page for your sandbox draft to this article, I would guess it is because of what we talked about in class and you just have it in your private sandbox.

I would just want to suggest with Water Scarcity you look at Expanding Sources of Water because its a less contributed to section. I am not sure what your Literature Review is about but this topic is important to water scarcity in general, though there is no answer im sure doing the right research would help you edit this article and write your own paper.