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The article I have chosen to write about is "Cruelty to Animals". This article is rated as a B-Class and is rated highly important on the importance scale. Throughout this article, the author stays on topic the entire article, mentioning forms of neglect, cultural forms of neglect, what is neglect, and much more. This article was last updated in 2011, which is somewhat out of date, and doesn't give a good insight to how this topic is effecting the world today. If I had to improve something about this article, it would be the flow of the article. Each section jumps to the next, and each section is not very relevant to the one before it. This article in some areas, attempts a neutral tone, however most of the article does stick to the opinion that no matter what, animal cruelty is not justifiable. Some might find that this article is biased, however it still sticks to the relevance of the title and topic at hand. When reviewing the citation links, most of the links worked and were useful, while a handful of the links seem to be no longer in service, and should no longer be considered a source. Most of the information in this article came from, novels that credible professors wrote on the subject, such as Charles Darwin. In the talk page, many conversations have to do with a certain type of animal, in which they are asking questions on whether something might be animal cruelty or not. Another big topic on the talk page, is the controversy on the laws mentioned in the article. Many people are mentioning the laws that other countries have, and whether this information is accurate or not.

Article Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Cruelty_to_animals