User:SPBrewster/Pilot (The Leftovers)/Nathaly005 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(SPBrewster)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SPBrewster/Pilot_(The_Leftovers)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pilot (The Leftovers)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added looks good and the tone is neutral. The sources work well. My overall impression is that you are doing a good job adding reliable and relevant information making it stronger.