User:SPLL/Yiddish/Brian redmond jr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SPLL, Llill2, Wsehwail, Bguti2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SPLL/Yiddish?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The origins of Yiddish is direct with geographical locations which is good. My advice for this section is to add more like maybe if the language is mixed with other languages, what culture use the language, is it a live language or dead one, etc. The Alphabet and Spelling section is well detailed on how the language works. My advice for this section is to add examples as to how the language works, maybe a IPA chart, maybe rules of the language, and more information of the phonology. Other than that the article is well made and has a good chunk of information that is useful to the audience!