User:SPLL/Yiddish/Ivanatheslayer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wsehwail, SPLL, Llill2, Bguti2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SPLL/Yiddish?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yiddish grammar

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked your contribution to the origins of the Yiddish dialect because I think it can provide some more meat to the lead section as I think it's a bit small and doesn't cover as much as it can about Yiddish origins and connections to other languages.

For sections like Plural nouns and adjectives, the examples can be kind of confusing to understand because they're usually at the end of every other sentence and include a Hebrew writing as well. I'd recommend maybe putting them in a bullet point list at the end for each point of the section like in the "gendered nouns" section.

There's a part that asks for "clarification needed" in the "Pronouns" section could be an opportunity to expand the entire section as a whole and improve upon the grammatical differences in the speaking populations.

For the information regarding the alphabet from your sandbox, maybe clarify what the difference between the phonetic system and the traditional system and why that might be so? You could also include the exceptions you mention the alphabet having, but I understand it might be difficult.