User:SRatty1652/Communication studies/OhHeckYeah Peer Review

General info
SRatty1652
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sandbox draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRatty1652/Communication_studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template :Article: Communication studies
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Current article: Communication studies
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Current article: Communication studies

Evaluate the drafted changes
General peer review:


 * There was nothing in the sandbox draft, so I could not see what you were working on.
 * Looking at the "review edits" page, there were no edits from this user.
 * This being said, my suggestions are going to be based on the current article. I'll share some things I notice that I think you could edit.

Lead:


 * I noticed there are a few issues with citations in this section (e.g., "citation needed" and "failed verification")

Content:


 * In the subsection of "History," I am not sure if the "Origins" section is entirely accurate. Is it true that no one started studying communication until post WWI? I feel like people definitely engaged in communication studies (to some degree) prior to the 20th century... unless the article specifies that they are referring to the formal education of communication studies.
 * In the "Scope and topics" section, I think you could add a section about communication studies in higher education (college).