User:SRobert99/1980 murders of U.S. missionaries in El Salvador/Western2023 Peer Review

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SRobert99


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 * 1980 murders of U.S. missionaries in El Salvador


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you have a good start- In my opinion I think you should add more on Romero especially with his involvement from the film. The sources are reliable, but I think if you added another source and add more on the Maryknolls I think that would tie together. I read that they were murdered but I don't know why they are important. Your content seems neutral, and it flows but I think you should add more to El Salvador as a whole. What was happening between the church and the goverment?