User:Sab3434/Sleep/Chodges8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sab3434


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sab3434/Sleep?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sleep

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far I am not really sure if what you uploaded was just what you added or there are tiny changes you forgot to indicate. Either way there are a few grammatical errors you can fix such as this sentence: "Delta waves are seen in stage 3 and 4 of sleep, when a person is in there deepest of sleep." This is grammatically incorrect and it should be "their" instead of "there." There is always room for growth since we are just starting reviewing and contributing to these articles. Overall this is a great topic and I hope to see whatever interesting information you add to this particular article!