User:Sab3434/Sleep/Sray13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sab3434


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sab3434/Sleep?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sleep

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am not sure what is original content and what are personal edits. But these are my suggestions in bold from what is available.

The electrical activity we see on an EEG are called brain waves. The four waves: alpha, beta, theta, and delta are all seen in the different stages of sleep. Alpha waves are seen when a person is in a resting state, but is still awake. Their eyes may be closed and all of their body is taking a break (I would suggest re-wording this). Beta waves take over alpha waves when a person is at attention, completing a task, or concentrating on something. Theta waves occur during the period of a person being awake to them transaction into Stage 1 of sleep (grammatic corrections). Delta waves are seen in stage 3 and 4 of sleep, when a person is in there deepest of sleep. (~)