User:Sadbubbles/Luis Felipe Ortega/ShawneeRose Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sadbubbles


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sadbubbles/Luis_Felipe_Ortega?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Luis_Felipe_Ortega

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good starting structure! I do think the sections can be filled out with some more information, and I think the beginning summary could use more context in terms of what Luis is known for/his career and what the events listed are about (such as, if they are fine art events, performing arts, fashion shows, etc.)

(For "link to current version of the article", I'm not sure if the Luis Felipe Ortega I linked to is the same artist you're researching. I believe this is an article from the spanish version of the site, and if he is the same person I would recommend reaching out to the professor about how to/if you can incorporate information from that article to yours.)

Good luck with the article!