User:SadiesC23/Lullingstone Roman Villa/Yusuftaguri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SadiesC23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SadiesC23/Lullingstone Roman Villa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lullingstone Roman Villa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I found it really interesting reading your article and noticing some of the similarities it shares with the Fishbourne palace, such as its accidental discovery and the subsequent excavations that followed it. I thought that your addition of the various periods was great and helped enhance the quality of the article by giving the reader a glimpse into each of the different stages at the villa throughout its complex history. You also did a very good job at remaining consistently neutral throughout the article draft. I think that your additions in terms of describing the various rooms of the villa such as the bath wing, basement room and pagan shrine helps paint a more vivid image, allowing readers to really envision what it would have looked like. I found myself curious as to who built the villa and the motivations behind its construction, which could be another interesting section to expand on further, assuming there are references and evidence that may answer such a question. Your sources all appear to be credible, up to date and relevant to your article, while the breakdown of your sections seem to be organized in a manner that flows neatly into one another. Overall I think you did a great job and your additions are extremely relevant to the topic at hand and they really helped to improve the overall quality of this article.