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=Siobhan Neal's Edit to Wikipedia's Pediatrics article for ENGL1101.58= Analysis of ArticleAfter reading the Wikipedia article about Pediatrics, I feel that it breaks down the word Pediatrics in this article. It describes how the pediatrics will preform their procedures and it breaks down into steps. The training of pediatricians are very important. Just depending on how the medical graduates hold a degree specific to the country and university in and from which they graduated. This degree qualifies that medical practitioner to become licensed or registered under the laws of that particular country, and sometimes of several countries, subject to requirements for internship or conditional registration. Pediatricians must undertake further training in their chosen field. This may take from four to eleven or more years, just depending on jurisdiction and the degree of specialization. Adolescents are in their own legal class, having rights to their own health care decisions in certain circumstances. Also, the authors tell more about the history than anything. It really, doesn't have to much to do with the title of Pediatrics. The author describes the history, the differences between adult and pediatric medicine, and the training of the pediatrics. The characters are the infants and adults, and the nurses.

Reading List

A numbered list of all your readings go here. Use the following format:
 * Evanston,III (1948). Pediatrics: American Academy of Pediatrics, 1948-1957 
 * Ball, Jane (2008). Pediatric Nursing Caring For Children.
 * Aaron, Jane E. (2012) The Little Brown Book: Compact Handbook, 2012

Original
The body size differences are paralleled by maturational changes. The smaller body of an infant or neonate is substantially different physiologically from that of an adult. Congenital defects, genetic variance, and developmental issues are of greater concern to pediatricians than they often are to adult physicians. A common adage is that children are not simply "little adults". The clinician must take into account the immature physiology of the infant or child when considering symptoms, prescribing medications, and diagnosing illnesses.

Revised
"Pediatrics "there are many differences in the body size maturational changes. The smaller body of an infant or neonate is very different physiologically of an adult. Congenital defects, genetic variance, and developmental issues are an greater concern to pediatricians than they often are to adult physicians. A common adage is that children are not simply "little adults". The clinician must take into account the immature physiology of the infant or child when considering symptoms, prescribing medications, and diagnosing illnesses. Primary care include health maintenance, diagnosis and treatment of common childhood illnesses, and routine developmental screenings.

Original Contribution
There is a great audience ahead of the most common changes about Pediatrics is that the body size differences are paralleled by maturational changes and the smaller body of an infant or neonate is substantially different physiologically from that of an adult. The difference between an adult and infants. Adolescents are in their own legal class, having rights to their own health care decisions in certain circumstances. Having the more on hands procedures, and put examples throughout it.