User:Safabsr/Islamic banking and finance/Cierracardenas Peer Review

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Overall, great contribution to this article. I liked the way you listed out the industry framework in number order because this makes it really easy to understand and follow the links to. I think that in order to continue to add content and explain what these 5 forms are there could be a few sentences next to each one.

In the next section I also think because you’re tackling (non) governmental Islamic banking organizations it would be nice to write a subheading under size and locations to differentiate the two. For example:

Size and locations

Non-gov: sentence to explain

Governmental: sentence to explain

While discussing the size and location I think organizing it in this way makes it more clear to distinguish between the two - because from my understanding it seems to be two very different means of financing.

Maybe in addition to the information you are providing about each type of financing you could implement the impact of each in order to give more context about how each differ.

Is there any more specific information regarding Pakistan that you could implement into the piece to give less statistics and more analysis about the effect of micro-financing as a concept? (Only saying this because from an outsider perspective, this is a topic that I do not know much about).

You maintain a neutral voice throughout and add essential statistics to explain the rates of which microfiinance has expanded over the years. This may have been mentioned in the rest of the article but I had a few questions about Sharia-compliant banking because it was mentioned in the first sentence.