User:Safabsr/Islamic banking and finance/Meganyeh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Safabsr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Safabsr/Islamic_banking_and_finance?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
The lead in this article clearly establishes that the author will be contributing to the Islamic banking and finance article by adding to the industry framework section. They are clear in the content they will be presenting while still being concise.

Content
The content in this article is concise and informative. It utilizes statistics to provide information about Pakistan's microfinance sector. All of the information is relevant to the article and provides accurate data while still providing further insight. The author focuses on the emerging changes in Islamic banking that is relevant and up to date.

Tone and Balance
The tone of the article remains neutral while still providing insight to the changes that have occurred in Islamic investment in the past few years. The author does a good job at presenting the information in a way that is qualitative to provide the reader with content that is clear and easy to digest.

Sources and References
There is a vast amount of sources and references in this article that are all scholarly and trustworthy. The author does a good job with citing multiple sources and using a plethora of scholarly sources to portray their point.

Organization
The article is well organized in content. There are tables and charts, and the qualitative information is presented quite well. The content does not have any grammatical errors and is easily readable.

Overall Impression
Overall, this article was concise and informative. It added to the article in a way that provided enriching information that did not previously exist in the article. There was clear information that was neutral and provided insight into microfinancing and government funded Islamic banking.