User:Sagegreen04/Inca society/JaG111 Peer Review

General info
Sagegreen04
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sagegreen04/Inca society:Kelly's rough draft is not currently written down in the sandbox. I received from her the edits she plans on doing on paper in person.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Inca society

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - The lead section has not been updated to reflect the new content added by Kelly. The lead section could use some work, as it does not give a summary of all the major points in the article (there was no mentioning of religion being polytheistic for the Inca). There were no references at all about any of the points that were talked about later in the article.

Religion - I really like the way you rephrased many sentences, but some could or could not fall under "plagiarism". I would definitely ask Sarah to look at the rephrased phrases, as I might be wrong and what you rewrote was definitely fine. Adding an image of how the Inca represented their gods would be lovely, but I know it might be impossible so no pressure to add an image. Also, adding a bit more about their gods and beliefs would be great as I am curious as to how many gods they worshipped, if there was a heaven for them or not, if they had figurines to represent their gods or special clothing for ceremonies, etc.

References - I think that more sources could definitely be used to back up some claims or simply make them more credible. It might be that one source covers most of the information from the Religion section, so many finding one or two more sources would be nice in order to not be "biased" (as Wikipedia asks of us to use multiple sources to not only get the viewpoint/information from one person/source).