User:Saher9/On-again, off-again relationship/Jennyzwerl4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Saher9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Saher9/On-again%2C_off-again_relationship?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * On-again, off-again relationship

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoy how concise and clear your article is, and I hope that my article comes across in the same manner. The division of definition, cause and impact is very easy to follow. In addition, your sources seem to be trustworthy and reliable.

I suggest maybe dividing the impact section into positive and negative impacts, since the second half is about on-again, off-again relationships that are non-toxic.

Lastly, it may be useful to put other terms used for relationships like this nowadays such as "situation-ships" and terms similar. Overall, great work!