User:Saifnasr25/Painting of the Six Kings/Footpathandstile Peer Review

General info
Saifnasr25
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Saifnasr25/Painting of the Six Kings - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Painting of the Six Kings - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

 Checklist #1-3 & 6: 

No issues. The changes look good. Everything is relevant.

''' Checklist #6: Is anything missing that should be added? '''

The article looks pretty complete. Nothing missing.

Some optional details if you can find them:


 * Who sent Mielich to Qasr Amra? Government agency, a museum, a private collector, or was he acting alone, self-funded?
 * When and from whom did the museum in Berlin acquire the fragments? Was it a direct donation/sale from Mielich?
 * Do the sources mention other notable, Wikipediable paintings in this genre that you could link to for context?

''' Checklist #4 & #5 (citations): Do the links work? Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? '''

Yes. Just add the citations & links later

 Random 

About some specific lines:

"The choice made by the artist reflects a sense of respect for the older great pre-Islamic civilizations as the youthful look is a sign of sophistication."

Since this is interpretative, you could add an explicit reference ("According to So-and-So,")

"One of the figures could be the "Khaqan", which is a title the Arabs gave to Turkic people or the Emperor of China. The other unknown king could have been a Turkish or an Indian prince."

Does Berchem mention his reasoning for identifying the figures this way?

"Out of all the kings in the fresco, the Khusraw of Sassania is set in the middle."

Minor: remove "the"

"An interpretation of this placement is to imply that the Khusraw is the leader of this congregations of kings."

Since this is interpretative, you could add an explicit in-text reference to the source