User:Sailing to Byzantium 2021/Thyrsus/Random2187 Peer Review

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Sailing to Byzantium 2021


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 * User:Sailing to Byzantium 2021/Thyrsus


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 * Thyrsus

Lead
Adding the Thyrsus connection to Dionysus/Bacchus was very helpful to improving the lead, I think it's perfect how it is now.

Content
There doesn't seem to be a lot of added content so far, the edits mostly focusing on reformatting and cleaning up the article, but the editor seems aware of this and made a note of expanding the section on symbolism. Perhaps a section could also be added on the Thyrsus' depiction in pop culture and media, or the Gallery section could be expanded to include more depictions of the Thyrsus as well, to make the article beefier.

Tone and Balance
The language of the article is very neutral.

Sources and References
The article is extremely well sourced, especially because of the added citations to the Literature section, well done!

Organization
The article is well organized, the ordering of the sections flows naturally, the language and grammar seems smooth, and the examples from Literature are even ordered by date written. I might rename the section 'Use' in the main article to something more descriptive such as 'Use in Religion' or 'Uses of the Thyrsus.'

Images and Media
The images are well sourced and relevant, It may liven up the article to add some of the depictions from Gallery as thumbnails in other sections of the article.

Overall
Great progress has been made on the article and I really like the formatting. Once some more content is added in places like 'Symbolism' I think the changes will be more than ready to publish and really improve the main article.