User:Saimansadiq/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bacillus coagulans

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because of the name of the article. Bacillus coagulans sounds like there are bacteria involved in blood coagulation. I was interested so I clicked on it and evaluated it.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

There needs to be a lead section added to this article. I also couldn't find any references for the information presented in the article. It would be appropriate to cite the authors of the sources. Another thing I noticed was the organization of the article. When I read the article, it seemed more like a sandbox where ideas were just being jotted down. There is no structure with the way the ideas are presented. At one point in the first section, the author is talking about how the probiotic pill can be prepared and later in the section they are talking about Natto, a food in Japan. It was a complete surprise to read this. It could be better if the author started a new paragraph or connected the information about Natto to the preparation of the probiotic pill. There aren't any images embedded in this article so that would be something to consider adding with sources and references.