User:Saintgraciemay/Body dysmorphic disorder/Sophiemeech Peer Review

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 * Body dysmorphic disorder
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The development of body Dismorphia can stem from trauma caused by parents/guardians, family, or close friends. In a recent study of the prevalence of childhood maltreatment among adults with body dysmorphia, researchers found that more than 75% of respondents had experienced some form of abuse as children. Indeed, the researchers found that adults who had a history of emotional neglect as children were especially vulnerable to BDD, though other forms of abuse, including physical and sexual abuse, were also identified as significant risk factors.As the children progress into their adult years, they start to visualise the abuse that has been done to their bodies, and start finding ways to hide, cover, or change it so they are not reminded of the trauma that they endured as an adolescences. Overall the rest seemed great!