User:Salcedat77/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Omar Apollo)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(I selected this article to evaluate because Omar Apollo is an emerging Queer Latinx musician. Looking into Omar Apollo: his music, early life, and identities is important to understand especially when looking at his target audience. His target audience primarily composed of Latinx Queer young adults. My initial impression of this article is that Omar Apollo's Queer/Gay identity is not mentioned until almost the end of the article when this part of Apollo's identity if a big part of his most well known music.)

Evaluate the article
(The lead section is decent and gives an overview that Omar Apollo is a musician who sings both in English and Spanish. The content of the article is quite balanced, however; the intersectionality of his identities and how they are reflected in his music is quite vague. It is important to put more emphasis on his intersectional identities especially as they are what his target audience is comprised of. The article does carry a very neutral tone and does a decent job on organization with the current categories. In addition, the images are decent; however they can be updated with newer photos from his more recent tour or more photos can simply be added. The sources seem to be reliable and work. The article has been proposed for deletion on multiple occasions in the past but it is not clear why aside from maybe unreliable sources/information. This article touches on a Queer Latinx artist which correlates with the topic of the UC Berkeley CHICANO 190: Gender & Sexuality in Latinx Pop Culture course.)