User:Sales.Alf/Pegasus (film)/GBP1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sales.Alf


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sales.Alf/Pegasus_%28film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It has a clear list of contents for readers to locate the information they want to know. Also, the plot, the background and the main cast are all shown clearly, so that people can easily go through the whole film and briefly understand the true connotation of the movie by reading this Wiki page. The content are added neutrally and constructed well. It is quite attractive for new the audience to know more about the movie because the editor has listed the soundtrack as well. My overall impression on this Wiki page is good, but I will also recommend that the editor can collect more images or screen shots about the movie's plot in order to make the readers see the movie in a more direct way.