User:Salinas413/Temporal plasticity/Ironphd10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Salinas413


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Salinas413/Temporal plasticity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phenotypic plasticity

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Unfortunate on the late change, but it seems like you have a good start already! I feel like you have plenty of references too so you can make up for lost time quickly. If for any reason, I am not looking at the full article, feel free to email me and I would be happy to take a look again. Find my email through the school outlook directory (BME department) or just tell me in class to take another look whenever. To maybe not have your old draft go completely to waste, maybe repurpose some of the examples from the old draft as reversible or irreversible changes if applicable. From your message in the "talk" page, it looks like you have a good direction to take your project in.

So far, I think you have a good lead paragraph summarizing what you will talk about. I really like how it is a well crafted paragraph with multiple references. No grammatical errors either. If the rest of your project is as well written as this paragraph, I think you will be in good shape. Possible ideas to expand upon would be the last 2 sentences. Definitely interesting how the permanent change was for wheat. Curious to know why when you're able to expand upon.

I hope this helps a bit. I look forward to a stronger draft and then the final version!