User:Sallyhuangjx/PARTISANS/Ameliareanna Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Sallyhuangjx
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Sallyhuangjx/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? YES. However, include an infobox on the right side of the page as a visual summary of the company.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? YES.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? YES; types of projects.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? NO.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Very concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? YES.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? YES.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Include more than the selected works. If the "selected works" have a description, include just a list of their other works with no description.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? YES.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? NO.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? NO.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? NO.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? YES.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? YES. Good sources.
 * Are the sources current? YES. However, some sources are not complete.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? There are no links. Add links to certain words/chain words. This will make the article more easy to understand if readers are unaware of certain words. Also, adding external links to the company project names will redirect the page to a more detailed outline of their projects, which is highly useful.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? YES. I suggest moving the "Style and Method" topic towards the top of the page, before "Projects". It makes the content of company easier to understand.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Very Few.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? YES.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? YES.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? YES.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? YES. However, missing an infobox.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? NO. Its sources do but creating external links will be add a lot more content.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? YES.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The content is very concise and straightforward. This makes it easily readable.
 * How can the content added be improved? Just improving the format will make it more easy to follow; eg., infobox, rearranged headings, links to words, etc.