User:Salmamama101/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://w.wiki/8wyR

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have a great interest in FXI social media has on our current society. I took this class knowing that we are really going to dissects the root of why our society has become so dependent on technology. Because we can't change our circumstances, we are to adapt. We can adapt to our new era of life by learning how to easily tell if the media we are consuming is beneficial for us or not. This can be done by having in the back of your mind that not everything is properly cited and that it is our responsibility to check if the things that we find on all platforms is factor that. I believe they're doing this exercise with Wikipedia is going to be very beneficial for me and my classmates because it shows that we have the power to not only check sources for ourselves but help other people who are also reading the same concept that we are.

Evaluate the article
The article that I chose was called "problematic social media use" and already by reading it the first time I can tell that this user has a great passion for talking about social media but their ideas are not being presented properly because of their lack of constructing a proper sentence. There are many unnecessary extra facts in each subcategory that are not essential in that particular branch of the topic. I selected this article thinking that I would only be making minor edits but I only started with the social anxiety portion of the article and I already want to continue doing the rest of the article and that may take hours due to the ideas being a little scattered. I believe that this article can be beneficial for users but it needs a little bit of a touchup in order to really break down the idea it's trying to present.