User:Salvuhdor/African-American Women for Reproductive Freedom/Sophiesab Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Salvuhdor


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Salvuhdor/African-American Women for Reproductive Freedom
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American Women for Reproductive Freedom
 * African-American Women for Reproductive Freedom

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Overall, the lead is descriptive and gets to the point. It describes the information presented and hooks a reader in. However, I think it could be phrased better such as "African-American women have been put in the forefront for the fight of reproductive rights..."

Content: Information is up to date a relevant to the issue. Discuss more the meaning of women of color as property and what that did for them during that tome

Tone and Balance: The Tone and Balance was neutral and it appears to be unbiased.

Source and Reference: Source and Reference are very reliable

Organization: The content is clear and understandable. Certain sentence phrasing could further the strength of the paper.

Images and Media: No images needed

Overall impression: I think the work added to the article enhances the information further. I thought it was well constructed, used reliable sources, and got to the point. I think certain sentence phrasing could be altered to mature the article a bit more. Overall, great article contribution