User:Sam.Herrera234/Jules Bonnot/Margo.C.45 Peer Review

General info
Sam.Herrera234
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sam.Herrera234/Jules Bonnot
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Jules Bonnot

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * You've done a really good job of expanding the amount of information about this person from the original article, especially concerning his early life and contexts for his crimes.
 * Under each section, breaking your information up into smaller paragraphs might make it a little bit more clear or easy to read, especially under the 1912 Spree section.
 * Although you've linked to the Wikipedia page about illegalism, it might be beneficial or clarifying to give a short summary about what this philosophy is and how it's different from regular anarchism.