User:Sam121302/Flower hat jelly/Joeybrown8 Peer Review

General info
Sam121302
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sam121302/Flower hat jelly
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Flower hat jelly

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The Fibonacci hashing seems like an interesting piece of information that directly applies to the article, but it may be more clear to the reader if there was more about how the fibonacci hashing is beneficial or the evolutionary path taken to obtain such features.

- Could potentially split up the article into more palatable categories instead of one unlabeled and the other being appearance and life cycle. More specific categories with smaller sections of writing underneath the is generally easier to understand because it is much more specific.

- Second section of writing is understandable and interesting

- potential inclusion of more than three sources (only if necessary to make it more content rich)