User:SamGFlem46/Takashi Nagai/Publius2500 Peer Review

General info

 * Sam's Work

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SamGFlem46/Takashi_Nagai?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template



Evaluate the drafted changes
In the section that focuses on his life in Nagasaki, you provide very informative and accurate information according to your source. You also remain neutral throughout and I think everything you provided strengthens the original article capturing his life.

In the Sino Japanese section I think you did a great job of explaining and relating the War to his life. You do not take any position on any of the information you simply state it and relate it to his life in a concise manner.

In the last section you remain a neutral voice and again provide accurate information according to your sources. The citations are needed on the ends of some sentences where you have already marked but everything else looks great. I would also try to find another source or two to validify your source or to add to the information you have already provided. Everything else looks exactly what we were asked to do.