User:SamTyler526/Trà Kiệu/Nasimfredj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(SamTyler526) (Novaarmstrong)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SamTyler526/Tr%C3%A0_Ki%E1%BB%87u?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The "lead" is a good intro into your article briefly summarizing what you'll be going over although I think it could be revised a bit to flow more grammatically.

The chronology section is a bit confusing, maybe lay out the two event separately rather than going over both events in the same paragraph.

Add some information about artifacts or rave goods or whatever has been excavated from the site to provide a more vivid picture of what Tra Kieu was like.