User:Sam Jones 2023/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Feminist theory

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it ties pretty directly to our course, and I wanted to start off with an easier article for my first evaluation. My first impression of this article is that it was a pretty shallow explanation of feminist theory written in a disorganized way that made it hard to read.

Evaluate the article
I found this article to be fairly unorganized and surface level. Feminist theory is an enormous topic to cover. This article throws a ton of information at a reader with little to no elaboration on each topic mentioned. A place where I found this to be a particular issue was the history section. The first paragraph alone covers Mary Wollstonecraft, Sojourner Truth and Susan B Anthony. It's disorganized and difficult to read, because the topic jumps around so much. I would suggest breaking the topics down more, instead of trying to squeeze multiple into one paragraph. Also, not all references mentioned are linked.