User:Sam Shrivatsa/Education in India/Brynnmarie28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sam Shrivatsa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sam%20Shrivatsa/Education_in_India?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Education in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section was not updated to include information on this topic. The content is relevant to the overall article; however, it cannot be determined whether or not the content is up to date - due to the sources for the much of the content being 10+ years old. There seems to be no missing content and the topic itself seems to fall under one of wikipedias equity gaps due to its nature in discussing educational inequality of marginalized communities in India.

The overall tone of the content is neutral and fact based. The content does not intentionally attempt to persuade the reader of one viewpoint; however due to the fact that some of the sources come from the NGOs self reported data, we are only receiving an objective viewpoint on their work. The content is very well written and there were no noticeable mistakes grammatically, or in spelling or syntax. The article is easy to read as it is broken down into many subsections and has appropriate links and citations where necessary. I had an overall positive initial reaction to this content addition due to its neutral tone, fact based presentation and clear organization and language; however, a few of the sources could be reviewed and updated to find less biassed information. A few of the sources also came directly from websites of unknown credibility - with no proper citations - so I would recommend reviewing this as well.