User:Sam Shrivatsa/Educational inequality/Brynnmarie28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sam Shrivatsa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sam%20Shrivatsa/Educational_inequality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Educational inequality
 * Educational inequality

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was not updated to include the information on trauma informed education. The content seems to be relevant to the topic of educational inequality and the information provided is up to date with all the sources provided being published within the last 5 years. The topic addresses how trauma impacts marginalized communities - a topic that touches on one of wikipedias equity gaps regarding underrepresented communities. The overall content added was done in a neutral and informative way, with equal representation of all affected parties and no clear bias on a position. The discussion on trauma informed approaches was integrated in a way that did not attempt to persuade the reader of a certain opinion, but rather presented well supported evidence towards the topic as a whole.

The sources included were all seemingly published in the last 5 years and scholarly. They are also written by diverse authors and directly address the information presented as a whole. I don't think any better sources could be included at the time. I can't necessarily comment on the organization in regards to the integration into the overall article, but the content included is concise, coherent and cohesive. The content is free of any major spelling, grammar or syntax errors and uses great informative language. My overall impression of this article is a positive one. It meets all of wikipedias guidelines and will be an effective addition to the article as a whole.