User:Sam Shrivatsa/User:Brynnmarie28/Homeless women in the United States/Sam Shrivatsa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brynnmarie28


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! Congrats on finishing the semester!

Lead
I currently don't see a lead.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - Yes, I really appreciated the inclusion of the effects of the pandemic.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes, some of the references to DV during the pandemic were especially pertinent
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? Yes, I thought the statistics on poor families with children during the 1990s being single mother households and African American mothers was a good addition to this end.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? - For the most part. I thought that the phrase “dependent” mothers and families was not a neutral opinion (albeit a fair opinion!). Maybe remove the 'dependent' all together?
 * I did not see any other personal references, the content was all extremely factual and neutral in view.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? - Yes, all the remaining content was well-cited and based in fact.
 * Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.) - I read through a couple of the sources ([3], [4], [15], [13]) that were more extensive prose. You have replicated these arguments concisely and accurately.
 * Are the sources current? Yes. I wonder if there are more recent statistics on DV and sexual abuse than [3], which seems to be from 2004? The rest of the sources are either historical or
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? - Yes. I would have liked to see some more information on the inequalities faced by Black and/or Hispanic single mothers, especially since you seem to have begun this research. I learnt Latino mothers were more likely to be homeless than the average - but you know your topic, and I'm sure you're aware of this already!
 * Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
 * Check a few links. Do they work? - Yes, see above. All the links were functional and correctly cited.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Yes, I appreciate the editing to reorganize around the section on trauma-sensitive care, as this is something I am doing in my work too!