User:Samanthali123/Nectar robbing/Ahm248 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Samanthali123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Samanthali123/Nectar robbing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nectar robbing

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additional content is relevant to the topic and is helpful for my understanding. The content that is added is neutral and without evident biases. If anything I wold suggest including more information about current questions or subjects of inquiry in this topic. At this point in the drafting process, I can’t find any citations. These should be added by using the “cite” function on the editing page. There are no images in this article currently. It might be helpful to add an image depicting the physical effects and damages caused by nectar robbing behavior. This content is easy to read, and I did not pick up on any major grammar edits. Well done. The one place that I could see a bit of restructuring happening is the “Effects on plant fitness” section. The transitions between paragraphs feel slightly clunky and the topics of each could flow together better. The article is much more complete now. You managed to add in content without making the piece feel clunky and disjointed.